Monday, 19 August 2013

FINAL : Renesmee and Jacob Black

 It was overwhelmingly the best day of my life. Jacob and I were officially sealed as one. It didn't take long for Aunty Alice to come galloping towards me and Jacob with a big grin on her face.
"Can I please show you the little gift I got you both now? Pretty please?" she said excitedly.
Jacob smiled, “Okay Alice."
She blindfolded the both of us and led the way. It came as no surprise to me after the blindfolds were removed that we both stood in front of the most beautiful house I'd ever laid eyes on. There in front of me stood a three story wooden house. Alice knew Jacob and I wanted to stay close to the family, and we were. They placed a beautiful house right next to mum and dad's.
"Alice! You shouldn't have," I said as I ran with excitement inside holding Jacob's hand.
"It's perfect.” said Jacob as he hugged Alice.
We walked back outside to everyone waiting. Mum and Dad, Uncle Emmet, Uncle Jasper and Aunty Rosalie stood there with warm smiles as it was such a special moment for us.
"Well I guess me and Nessy shall make ourselves at home" said Jacob, as he humorously hinted for everyone to let us have some alone time. Nessy was my nickname everyone would call me. We all laughed while Dad stood there not laughing as much as we were.
"Lighten up Edward, our baby girl's all grown up, and in the best hands .Besides she's right next door" mum said.
Dad smiled and walked over to give me and Jacob both a hug before they all went back to clean up the wedding decorations. Jacob lifted me off the ground,
"Welcome home sweetheart."
I laughed as he carried me inside and took me upstairs to our beautiful bedroom. I walked over to the window and was absolutely amazed at the breathtaking view we had. The sun shone all over forks Washington, the beautiful pink orange sun about to set on this most wondrous evening as Jacob walked over and wrapped his arms around me and joined me in dazing at the view. It was picture perfect, exactly how my life seemed. It was no ordinary afternoon in forks, today I went to sleep as Mrs Renesmee Black.




Next morning.
I sat in bed trying to not burst out in laughter listening to Jacob's snore. How did the whole of forks not hear this Werewolf? It sounded like a broken washing machine. I felt humorous. I leaned over to him and blocked his nose with my fingers.
"NESSY!" he yelled.
I jumped out of bed and ran down the stairs laughing hysterically as he chased me from behind.
"Gotcha"
I tripped up as he grabbed me by the ankle. He sat on top of me, tickling my feet on the living room floor. Jacob knew how much I hated being tickled. Dad and Mum walked in on Jacob bouncing up and down on me like a spring while I tried pulling his hair to get off.
"How romantic" Mum said sarcastically looking over to Dad.
"Yes, I don't remember our honeymoon being this ...violent?" Dad replied scratching his head.
They both giggled.
"Mum, Dad! It’s so good to see you."
I punched Jacob in the stomach and he finally got off. I walked over and hugged them.
"Nessy sweetheart, why won't you just take our offer of having a proper Honeymoon where your Father and I had. It's just such a magical island. You really are missing out."
Mum and Dad were still trying to convince Jacob and I to have a romantic Honeymoon get away prior to the wedding, but we both politely declined their offer simply because it wasn't our thing. Everyday loving Jacob was my honeymoon.
"Mum, seriously its fine. This place, Jacob, everyone around me makes life magical." “Ugh, what's that smell?"
Jacob giggled from behind me. "Sorry"
"Gross Jacob! Way to kill the moment." We both laughed at each other while Mum and Dad looked at us confused laughing about Jacob's farting incident.
"I will never understand what you have going on with each other but I do know you both are meant to be."
"Thanks Dad." I hugged him again.
The phone began to ring.
"I'll get that," Jacob said running up the stairs to where the phone was.
I walked over to the kitchen and made my parents both a cup of tea. They both sat at the kitchen table, talking, holding each other’s hands just like they had since they first met.
“Oops,” I said, trying to catch the tea cup that slipped out of my hands.
“Got it.”
Dad took care of that for me. I loved how after so many years my Dad’s reflex of catching something before it falls still has my Mother breathless. Jacob and I differed to how we show affection towards one another, but our love was definitely what Mum and Dad had. Jacob really was my better half, we never boasted about it on a daily basis like my parents would but we simply could not live without each other. We drove each other insane, doing things best friends would rather than couples. We weren’t the typical married couple, we lived to the extreme. We made a promise, that every day we would do something different and wild for we knew that tomorrow isn’t promised and that every day is short.  Jacob would always remind me to ‘live in the now’. He loved life, every minute and second was precious to not only him, but me as well. Being half human half vampire didn’t come with everything it guarantees when being a pure vampire. I wasn’t fortunate enough to have the life-expanse Mum and Dad had and it never bothered me a bit. Life was beyond perfect. I had all that I need. There was no way anything could harm us and get in the way of my happiness. Not now, not ever.
“Jacob is taking some time now, I wonder who’s on the phone.”
I walked upstairs, quietly, creeping up behind him without a noise to give him a fright. Suddenly , to my horror I heard Jacob gritting his teeth, he was mad, furious even. What was on the other side of the phone that made him feel this way? As I went to put my hand on his shoulder Jacob spoke..
“She is not my child Leah it was a mistake, you were a mistake. I am married Leah leave me alone!!”
I froze, never have I ever felt numb all over my body. Leah, the one person he claimed was family to him had a past with him? It can’t be. I blacked out, I suddenly felt a heavy pressure on my head, my eyes rolling back and before I knew it there my dad was, caught me just before I fell.


Final : Jacob ad Renesmee Black


It was overwhelmingly the best day of my life. Jacob and I were officially sealed as one. It didn't take long for Aunty Alice to come galloping towards me and Jacob with a big grin on her face.
"Can I please show you the little gift I got you both now? Pretty please?" she said excitedly.
Jacob smiled, “Okay Alice."
She blindfolded the both of us and led the way. It came as no surprise to me after the blindfolds were removed that we both stood in front of the most beautiful house I'd ever laid eyes on. There in front of me stood a three story wooden house. Alice knew Jacob and I wanted to stay close to the family, and we were. They placed a beautiful house right next to mum and dad's.
"Alice! You shouldn't have," I said as I ran with excitement inside holding Jacob's hand.
"It's perfect.” said Jacob as he hugged Alice.
We walked back outside to everyone waiting. Mum and Dad, Uncle Emmet, Uncle Jasper and Aunty Rosalie stood there with warm smiles as it was such a special moment for us.
"Well I guess me and Nessy shall make ourselves at home" said Jacob, as he humorously hinted for everyone to let us have some alone time. Nessy was my nickname everyone would call me. We all laughed while Dad stood there not laughing as much as we were.
"Lighten up Edward, our baby girl's all grown up, and in the best hands .Besides she's right next door" mum said.
Dad smiled and walked over to give me and Jacob both a hug before they all went back to clean up the wedding decorations. Jacob lifted me off the ground,
"Welcome home sweetheart."
I laughed as he carried me inside and took me upstairs to our beautiful bedroom. I walked over to the window and was absolutely amazed at the breathtaking view we had. The sun shone all over forks Washington, the beautiful pink orange sun about to set on this most wondrous evening as Jacob walked over and wrapped his arms around me and joined me in dazing at the view. It was picture perfect, exactly how my life seemed. It was no ordinary afternoon in forks, today I went to sleep as Mrs Renesmee Black.
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Next morning.
I sat in bed trying to not burst out in laughter listening to Jacob's snore. How did the whole of forks not hear this Werewolf? It sounded like a broken washing machine. I felt humorous. I leaned over to him and blocked his nose with my fingers.
"NESSY!" he yelled.
I jumped out of bed and ran down the stairs laughing hysterically as he chased me from behind.
"Gotcha"
I tripped up as he grabbed me by the ankle. He sat on top of me, tickling my feet on the living room floor. Jacob knew how much I hated being tickled. Dad and Mum walked in on Jacob bouncing up and down on me like a spring while I tried pulling his hair to get off.
"How romantic" Mum said sarcastically looking over to Dad.
"Yes, I don't remember our honeymoon being this ...violent?" Dad replied scratching his head.
They both giggled.
"Mum, Dad! It’s so good to see you."
I punched Jacob in the stomach and he finally got off. I walked over and hugged them.
"Nessy sweetheart, why won't you just take our offer of having a proper Honeymoon where your Father and I had. It's just such a magical island. You really are missing out."
Mum and Dad were still trying to convince Jacob and I to have a romantic Honeymoon get away prior to the wedding, but we both politely declined their offer simply because it wasn't our thing. Everyday loving Jacob was my honeymoon.
"Mum, seriously its fine. This place, Jacob, everyone around me makes life magical." “Ugh, what's that smell?"
Jacob giggled from behind me. "Sorry"
"Gross Jacob! Way to kill the moment." We both laughed at each other while Mum and Dad looked at us confused laughing about Jacob's farting incident.
"I will never understand what you have going on with each other but I do know you both are meant to be."
"Thanks Dad." I hugged him again.
The phone began to ring.
"I'll get that," Jacob said running up the stairs to where the phone was.
I walked over to the kitchen and made my parents both a cup of tea. They both sat at the kitchen table, talking, holding each other’s hands just like they had since they first met.
“Oops,” I said, trying to catch the tea cup that slipped out of my hands.
“Got it.”
Dad took care of that for me. I loved how after so many years my Dad’s reflex of catching something before it falls still has my Mother breathless. Jacob and I differed to how we show affection towards one another, but our love was definitely what Mum and Dad had. Jacob really was my better half, we never boasted about it on a daily basis like my parents would but we simply could not live without each other. We drove each other insane, doing things best friends would rather than couples. We weren’t the typical married couple, we lived to the extreme. We made a promise, that every day we would do something different and wild for we knew that tomorrow isn’t promised and that every day is short.  Jacob would always remind me to ‘live in the now’. He loved life, every minute and second was precious to not only him, but me as well. Being half human half vampire didn’t come with everything it guarantees when being a pure vampire. I wasn’t fortunate enough to have the life-expanse Mum and Dad had and it never bothered me a bit. Life was beyond perfect. I had all that I need. There was no way anything could harm us and get in the way of my happiness. Not now, not ever.
“Jacob is taking some time now, I wonder who’s on the phone.”
I walked upstairs, quietly, creeping up behind him without a noise to give him a fright. Suddenly , to my horror I heard Jacob gritting his teeth, he was mad, furious even. What was on the other side of the phone that made him feel this way? As I went to put my hand on his shoulder Jacob spoke..
“She is not my child Leah it was a mistake, you were a mistake. I am married Leah leave me alone!!”

I froze, never have I ever felt numb all over my body. Leah, the one person he claimed was family to him had a past with him? It can’t be. I blacked out, I suddenly felt a heavy pressure on my head, my eyes rolling back and before I knew it there my dad was, caught me just before I fell.

Sunday, 18 August 2013

Final version of FanFic

Into the New World

Sweating heavily Aang wakes up from a nightmare that he is all too familiar with.
"Niwa? ... Jake Sully?" murmurs the the Avatar.
Five long years has passed after Avatar Aang saved the world from Sozens comet and unified all four nations into peace and harmony. Now he's all grown up and is about to face another impossible task.
Throwing away his blanket in a rush, he walks out to the open balcony to get some fresh air.
Outside Aang could see the towering walls of Ba-Sing-Se, the capital of the Earth Kingdom which only 5 years ago was a fierce battlefield.
"Ugh.. What is this dream trying to tell me..?" Confused Aang decides to leave and meet the only person that could possibly help him..
Gliding through the air, Aang feels the warm breeze comforting him and calming him down.
Finally after a good hour of flying he arrives.
Slowly descending from his flight he could see what looked like a small island floating in the water, but only the Avatar knew that this large 'thing' wasn't an island. But rather a Lionturtle.
The Lionturtle was a large ancient creature with the head of a lion but with a turtle-like body. He had existed before the era of the Avatar and possessed immense wisdom and power.
Just as Aang had reached the water a giant paw had gently come up to catch him. Although it was only his second time meeting the Lionturtle he was still left with awe.
The Avatar going back to his monk roots, bowed to the creature with both fists together.
"Hello Master"
"What brings you here, Avatar?" the Lionturtle asks.
"I've come here to ask if you could help me... I have been having the same dreams for weeks, the same damn ones..." the Avatar vents out with frustration, "I hear whispers.. something called Niwa, and a name.. Jake... Jake Sully"
The ancient creature closed his eyes.
After a moment of silence Aang went into a state of shock. The Lionturtle was looking into his mind...
"It was wise of you to have come to me Avatar" there was a faint sound of emotion in his voice. "So this was your plan after all Eywa...".
"Wha.. What!?.." Aang still in the state of shock could barely talk..
"Fine" muttered the Lionturtle. "I'll send this boy to your world, but from here on out he is your responsibility".
From his paw a bright light began to appear. The light was getting bigger and bigger until it covered the whole of Aang's body, and then disappeared along with the Avatar.
"Wake up" whispered a voice "Wake up".
Aang's eyes slowly began to open, surprised by his surroundings he quickly raised himself from the ground using his air bending.
Panicking Aang began to phase around where he had just woken up.
'Where am I?" he thought. Around him were plants he had never seen before and saw trees that was as high as the walls of Ba-Sing-Se.
Walking around aimlessly Aang finally realizes that the sun is about to go down.
"Shoot I need to find shelter quick" he said to himself, only realizing later how stupid he was.
"Oh, that's right I can just make a shelter" he said with a childish grin.
Using his earth bending he formed a large cave and set up a fire and began to go over what had happened.
Two years had past since the RDA led by the humans left Pandora. Jake Sully had become the new chieftain of the Omaticaya clan although he was a hybrid form the Na'Vi they did not disagree with his title.
Running in the black night Jake throws his spear at a retreating dog. Hitting it straight in the heart. The dog felt no pain.
Slowly picking up the corpse Jake whispers "Thank you and sorry". Puts the corpse in his pouch and walks back.
Not too far from arriving in the village Jake spots something unusual, a faint light from what looked like a cave.
"What are those rascals doing again" thought Jake, as there were a couple of young Na'Vi's staying out till dark only to be found by the chieftain and scolded back to the village.
Jake knows.. He knows how dangerous the dark can be with predators lurking for their prey.
Finally he had arrived to where the light was. As he was walked into the cave he couldn't believe what he was seeing. A young man with arrow shaped tattoo's on his body.
"Who are you!" hissed Jake, grabbing his spear and pointing it at Aang. There was no hesitation from Jake, he had done this all too often.
Aang could not believe what he was seeing, in-front of him was a tall blue coloured creature pointing a spear at him.
Sensing danger Aang immediately created a gush of wind towards the creature shoving him back to a wall.
Winded the blue figure was gasping for breath and probably startled by what he had just saw, the man just controlled the air!
"My name is Aang" he replied "I am looking for someone named Jake Sully".
Jake cautiously muttered "The person your looking for is right in front of you".




first draft of fanfic

I decided to do my fanfic as a cross-over between the cartoon Avatar the Last Air Bender and the movie Avatar. Thought it would be interesting so im giving it a go. Hopefully you guys will enjoy reading it.

Sweating heavily Aang wakes up from a nightmare that he is all too familiar with.
"Niwa? ... Jake Sully?" murmurs the the Avatar.
Five long years has passed after Avatar Aang saved the world from Sozens comet and unified all four nations into peace and harmony. Now he's all grown up and is about to face another impossible task.
Throwing away his blanket in a rush, he walks out to the open balcony to get some fresh air.
Outside Aang could see the towering walls of Ba-Sing-Se, the capital of the Earth Kingdom which only 5 years ago was a fierce battlefield.
"Ugh.. What is this dream trying to tell me..?" Confused Aang decides to leave and meet that only person that could possibly help him..
Gliding through the air, Aang feels the warm breeze comforting him and calming him down.
Finally after a good hour of flying he arrives.




Saturday, 17 August 2013

FINAL- Sacrifice within the Addams Family

Wednesday Addams has always been the dark shadow of Gomez and Morticia Addams children. But when given the chance to fulfill her wicked destiny, will she be able to do it?

"OK Wednesday," came the icy cold voice of Morticia Addams "it is time."

Wednesday Addams stood in her father’s dark cellar, looking down at these two pale, familiar faces. What is thus horrid feeling of sadness? She had always wanted this. So what was holding her back?

*Previous Day*

"Pugsley! Hurry with that sword would you!?" yelled Wednesday.

"Coming!" Pugsley entered the grand hall of the Addams mansion, greeted by the wicked smirk of his sister.

Wednesday looked at her brother disgusted… Ugh. The repugnant swine lives. Oh let this be the day you 'accidentally' fall into my sword and I no longer have to witness your presence

Pugsley loves these duals with his sister. Wednesday always puts up a fight, but fails in how she holds her sword. He knows she would never get a clean cut on him, but it was fun.



Then the high pitch cry of Pubert was heard.

"Oh, what is that imp crying about now...." moaned Wednesday, imagining Pubert falling from the roof of the four storey mansion.

"Come on Wednesday. Let’s go see what's wrong." Wednesday looked at Pugsley unamused though followed her older brother.

Pubert was sitting in the middle of the mansion foyer holding a rope that hung down from the high ceiling. Wednesday's eyes followed the ropes which lead to the overhanging chandelier and she figured what her devil spawned brother was planning.

"Pubert. Don't you…"

Down came the chandelier.

*Present Day*

Wednesday awoke in her bed with the worst headache. She pulled her sore body from the bed and limped over to the cracked mirror. What was that on her cheek? A smudge? She tried to wipe the line away, but felt pain shoot from it. As Wednesday looked closer at the mark, a drop of dry blood was seen. Wednesday felt an uncontrollable anger brew within her dark soul.   

"Argh!" Wednesday threw her fist into the cracked mirror; threw her headless doll across the room and slammed her coat hanger on the floor; all forgetting to take a breath.

She pants heavily as her mother calls "Wednesday… Darling?" The pitter-patter of her mother’s footsteps came to a stop at her door "What is the matter dear?"

Wednesday pulled her pitch black hair into two tight plaits

"Nothing Mother" only the fact that she wishes the two fools were never born

"OK dear. Grandmamma Addams made pigeon eyed porridge" Morticia's light steps faded away.

Wednesday's black eyes grew as an idea came to mind... Grandmamma Addams! Her potions room must have something that will rid me of my wearisome brothers...

The room stunk of mould, mildew and rotting pig intestines. Wednesday took a deep breath in, she loved it. She found Grandmamma Addams potions book, but it was all written in ancient primordial Witch script
…Dead end...

Then Wednesday saw it.
The album. It was wrapped in what looked like Black dragon skin, and as Wednesday pulled it out; she could see a faint title had been etched into the front
Druzina o Ataddams (Addams Family)
Wednesday opened the album and there was a charcoal sketch of a family watching someone engulfed in flames. At the bottom read
…Aristotle & Ophelia iti z sins Hubert & Henery Ataddams. Delez Gori, Germany, 1653...
As Wednesday’s curious hand kept turning the pages, sketches soon became photographs and names became familiar
… Gomez & Fester Addams...
'Murder' was the apparent theme
... Stake burning, Hungary, 1893; River drowning, England, 1903...



"Poor souls..." Wednesday jumped. It was Grandmamma Addams. She looked at the album with reminiscent eyes, "but it had to be done..."

"Grandmamma... What is this?"

Grandmamma Addams sat Wednesday down and told her of the "Addams Family Sacrifice." Wednesday sat in curiosity and learnt that every third generation Addams made a sacrifice to Adad; the family Diablo. The sacrifice insured the protection of the family for another three generations. To choose not to do so was a dangerous gamble.

Grandmamma told Wednesday that her brothers were a liability for the family. Neither had displayed an evil worthy of the Addams name and the weaker had to be sacrificed. Grandmamma Addams had warned Gomez but he refused to go through with it.

Wednesday contemplates… Pugsley or Pubert MUST DIE.

This was all so much for Wednesday... Where's Mother? She will make sense of this all.

Morticia was standing at the window gazing into the moon. Wednesday had always admired her mother’s odd beauty. "What troubles you my dear?" Wednesday was not shocked her mother knew she was there. Morticia turned around as if she was floating on a cloud "Is it the sacrifice?"

Wednesday’s eyebrows rose "You know about this?"

"Oh Wednesday. Come here my child full of woe," Wednesday embraced in her mother’s cold arms.

"The sacrifice must take place for the betterment of this family...and you dear will be the one to perform the Sacrificial Ritual" Wednesday’s eyes widened. She always wished to inherit her mother’s pastel beauty, but she would sooner have to inherit Morticias mysterious darkness.

A plan had been put in place for the sacrifice and Lurch was ordered to take Pugsley and Pubert down to the dark cellar. Wednesday watched as her brothers screamed with fear as Lurch took a hold of them both.


"Lurch! Tie them down to the block. Do hurry it up you Oaf!" Grandmamma Addams yelled.

Her brother’s tears were staining the wooden blocks, the sound of their cries and sobs were echoing throughout the cellar.

Pugsley pleaded to his sister "Please Wednesday... I don't want to die like this..."

Pubert was crying as he didn't understand why he was strapped down. Wednesday stared at the axe in her hand. She had started the day so determined to end the lives of her brothers, and now that the opportunity was here, she felt like she just couldn’t do it.

"Wednesday! Do it!" yelled Grandmamma Addams. Wednesday lifted the axe above her head and swung at Pugsley's block
...cutting his straps; freeing him.

She turned to Pubert's block and swung at his straps.

"Wednesday! What are you doing!?" Grandmamma Addams was furious. They all turned on their chaotic Grandmamma.

"Pugsley. Tie her down" Wednesday spoke icily.

"This is not the ritual!"

"A sacrifice is still a sacrifice Grandmamma..."

"Morticia! Stop them!"

"We don't want to crush their creativity mother..."

"Let go of me Pugsley!"

Wednesday stared down at the scrambling head of white, scraggly hair...

She raised the axe up high...

And with an evil smirk...




Monday, 12 August 2013

FINAL: Sequel to Paula Morris' Ruined

Sequel to Paula Morris' Ruined

Since regretfully moving back to New York with her father, Rebecca expected her life to simply go back to normal. She had left the curse and ghost stories behind in New Orleans. However,  one night, a young girl called Scout turns up in her bedroom asking for her help and warning her of danger. Rebecca thinks nothing too strange of the situation, until she realises, Scout is a ghost.


A ghost; another ghost, spirit whatever you want to call it. She thought she was done with this - done with all the supernatural since Mardi gras in New Orleans.

Rebecca sighed and rolled onto her side to face the window, watching nondescript clouds float by.  It was quite a beautiful day.

"I wonder where they go."

Rebecca gasped and jumped up on her bed. When the source of the voice was located she huffed out an annoyed breath and lay back down.

"What did I tell you about popping up like that?"

"Sorry," Scout smiled sheepishly. "I was just wondering about the clouds, like you were."

"I wasn't wondering about clouds." I was wondering why my life is filled with people who are supposed to be dead. Not popping up in my room like it's a commonplace thing.  
  
"I know where he's going tonight…"

Rebecca turned her head and looked at Scout. She was sat at her desk, swinging the chair in a small semi-circle. Their eyes met as they processed the information.

"Okay."

***





Wandering around the dark, cold streets of New York was not Rebecca's idea of spending the night. Not when she could be snuggled down in bed, talking to Anton and getting to know a delicious cup of hot chocolate.

She let out an exasperated sigh as she trudged through the icy snow and glared at the almost translucent girl dancing up ahead.

Lucky her, thought Rebecca. Damn ghost is already dead so the ice and snow doesn't bother her at all. 

She kicked a lump of snow begrudgingly with her boot and looked up to make sure that she didn't lose sight of Scout. She was barely visible in this light and to be honest, she did not want to be left out in the imposing concrete jungle of New York in the middle of a winter’s night. The tall obelisk structures looming in every direction made her nervous. Dark alleys dominated almost every corner and every black hole of a gap between every building. 
   
"We're here."

Scout's voice dragged her from her thoughts as she took in their location. They were in an upscale part of town, which was surprising to Rebecca. The cliché thing would have been for them to end up in some run down part of the city that screamed 'bad idea'. Instead, they stood outside a fancy looking bar that managed to fit in amongst the skyscrapers.

"You sure this is it?"


Scout nodded and held out her hand. Every time they physically connected, Rebecca became like Scout; a ghost. Not quite dead, but able to walk around without being seen like one. A handy ability when one needed to enter a place not meant for the under-aged and search for someone they probably weren't meant to be searching for. Rebecca placed her freezing hand into Scouts and crossed the street into the high end building.




They weaved themselves between silk and cashmere bodies that pulsed under neon lights, careful not to let go of each other lest something go wrong and they got caught.

"There." Scout led Rebecca through the crowd to the square bar placed in the very centre of the club.  On the side adjacent to them, was the man they had come to find.

Rebecca scrutinized the man Scout pointed out. He looked almost middle aged. About forty-five she would assume. Unexceptional brown hair and a five o clock shadow covering his jaw. He took a sip from his glass and then turned to someone who had appeared behind him.

Both girls watched as he rose and embraced the new arrival, evidently a female, judging by the intimacy displayed between them. The woman turned slightly as she took a seat beside the male. Just then, Rebecca felt Scout's hand tighten around her own.

"Scout…? Are you okay?"

No answer. She seemed to be shaking slightly, her eyes widened in disbelief at the couple. Rebecca tried to see what was troubling the girl so much but she couldn't guess. The woman's face was not clearly visible to Rebecca and so she was unable to make out the identity of her, though she did seem familiar.

Scout murmured something beside her.

"What?"

"My mother…" she trailed off.

"You're mother?" Rebecca repeated. "What about her?"

"That's my stepmother."

"What? Who is?" Rebecca was becoming increasingly confused by the girls mumble. "Scout who are you talking about?"

"Her." The young spirit lifted a single finger and pointed to the woman seated beside the man.

Rebecca shook her head in a baffled manner. "But, I thought you said she was dead? That your whole family was killed?”

"I did." Scout nodded.

"Then how can she-?"

Suddenly someone was shoved into Rebecca. Though being connected to Scout gave her the physicality of a ghost, the feeling of someone moving through her still shocked her and she gasped, jumping forward into Scout. The girls became unbalanced and Rebecca, forgetting herself, let go of Scout's hand to steady her. By the time Scout managed to warn her of her actions, it was too late and the scream from a nearby woman brought her mistake into light. She was visible.

Panicking, she darted her eyes around, searching for Scout. As she looked up to scan the bar, her eyes met with a familiar, murky brown on the other side.

No…

Rebecca stood shocked as she finally saw the woman’s face.
  
Before she could manage to recollect her thoughts, Scout had grabbed hold of Rebecca's hand and started hauling her toward the exit.

They pushed and shoved their way through bodies as fast as they could. Rebecca tried to ignore the uneasy feelings every time someone passed through her, but being caught was not part of the plan and so they had to get out, fast. Once outside, they didn't stop running.

Ten minutes and a couple blocks later, the girls rested themselves on an isolated bench outside a small playground.

"She was my step-mother," Scout began. "She married my father about eight months before the murder. I thought she was dead. I saw him shoot her!"

At the mentioning of her death Rebecca couldn't help but glance at the always present dark red stain on Scout's chest; right above her heart.

"She's dating my father…" Rebecca whispered.

"What?"

"This can't be right. Something isn't right," Rebecca said. "Why would your step-mother, who is dating my father, be meeting the man who murdered her own family? Why would she be sitting with him so intimately?"





They sat in the silence of the night with only Rebecca’s frosty breath as company.

Second Draft:

It was literally the best day of my life. Me and Jacob were officially sealed as one. It didn't take long for Aunty Alice came galloping towards me and Jacob with a big grin on her face.

"Can i please show you the little gift i got you both now? Pretty please?" she said excitedly.

Jacob smiled ,"Okay Alice."

She blindfolded the both of us and led the way. It came as no surprise to me after the blindfolds were removed that we both stood in front of the most beautiful house I'd ever laid eyes on. There in front of me stood a three story wooden house. Alice knew myself and Jacob wanted to stay close to the family, and we were. They placed a beautiful house right next to mum and dad's.

"Alice! You shouldn't have" I said as I ran with excitement inside holding Jacob's hand.

"It's perfect' said Jacob as he hugged Alice.

We walked back outside to everyone waiting. Mum and Dad, Uncle Emmet , Uncle Jasper and Aunty Rosalie stood there with warm smiles as it was such a special moment for Me and Jacob.

"Well I guess me and Nessy shall make ourselves at home" said Jacob, as he humorously hinted for everyone to let us have some alone time. Nessy was my nickname everyone would call me. We all laughed while Dad stood there not laughing as much as we were.

"Lighten up Edward, our baby girl's all grown up, and in the best hands .Besides she's right next door" mum said.

Dad smiled and walked over to give me and Jacob both a hug before they all went back to clean up the wedding decorations. Jacob lifted me off the ground,

"Welcome home sweetheart"

I laughed as he carried me inside and took me upstairs to our beautiful bedroom. I walked over to the window and was absolutely amazed at the breathtaking view we had. The sun shone all over forks washington, the beautiful pink orange sun about to set on this most beautiful evening as Jacob walked over and wrapped his arms around me and joined me in dazing at the view. It was picture perfect, exactly how my life seemed. It was no ordinary afternoon in forks, today I went to sleep as Mrs Renesmee Black.


Next morning.

I sat in bed trying to not burst out in laughter listening to Jacob's snore. How did the whole of forks not hear this Werewolf ? It sounded like a broken washing machine. I felt humorous. I leaned over to him and blocked his nose with my fingers.

"NESSY!" he yelled.

I jumped out of bed and ran down the stairs laughing hysterically as he chased me from behind.

"Gotcha"

I tripped up as he grabbed me by the ankle. He sat on top of me ,tickling my feet on the living room floor. Jacob knew how much I hated being tickled. Dad and Mum walked in on Jacob bouncing up and down on me like a spring while I tried pulling his hair to get off.

"How romantic" Mum said sarcastically looking over to Dad.

"Yes, I don't rememember our honeymoon being this ...violent?" Dad replied scratching his head.

They both giggled.

"Mum, Dad! So good to see yous."

I punched Jacob in the stomach and he finally got off. I walked over and hugged them.

"Nessy sweetheart, why won't you just take our offer of having a proper Honeymoon where your Father and I had. It's just such a magical island. You really are missing out."

Mum and Dad were still trying to convince Jacob and I to have a romantic Honeymoon get away prior to the wedding, but we both politely declined their offer simply because it wasn't our thing. Everyday loving Jacob was my honeymoon.

"Mum, seriously it's fine. This place, Jacob , everyone around me makes life magical." " Ugh, what's that smell?"

Jacob giggled from behind me. "Sorry"

"Gross Jacob! Way to kill the moment." We both laughed at eachother while Mum and Dad looked at us confused laughing about Jacob's farting incident.

"I will never understand what you have going on with eachother but I do know you both are meant to be."

"Thanks Dad." I hugged him again.

*phone rings.

"I'll get that" Jacob said running up the stairs to where the phone was.

FINAL - Harry Potter




Harry Potter - The Time After The Big Battle


The rebuild of Hogwarts was going quickly, the damage from the fight was hardly visible and Harry could tell that the School had changed. The atmosphere was different from when Dumbledore was the headmaster, so much had happened since his death. Everything was over now… or was it? Could it really be that they could now live in a peaceful world? Harry knew that peoples’ wounds had still not healed, and things would never be the same. Professor McGonagall was the headmaster now, it was clear that she had worked hard to rebuild the school.

“Harry, I’m talking to you. Are you even listening?” Ginny looked concerned at him.

“I’m sorry, Ginny,” Harry mumbled, “What did you say?”

Ginny smiled and repeated her question: “How do you feel about going back to Hogwarts?”

A tough question he thought, he took his time and replied: “I’m okay; I just look forward to seeing all my friends again.” Harry forced himself to smile; he honestly did not know how he felt about going back, but he did notice he was getting nervous.  

Ginny gave his hand a reassuring squeeze. 

“I can’t believe we’ll be having classes with Ginny,” Ron said irritated, but before anyone could reply, they had reached the school.

“Let’s go Ron,” Hermione said while pushing him out of the carriage."
                                               
***

"What’s he doing here?" Ron hissed while pointing at Malfoy. 

“Well, technically he hasn't completed his year either, so he will probably be studying with us.” Hermione replied calmly.

“But he’s a Death Eater!” Ron shouted.


“He was a Death Eater, Ron. What else should they do with him?”

“I don’t know; send him to Azkaban or something? Do you seriously believe it’s a good idea to have him here?”

“Don’t be ridiculous Ron; there must be something good in him if he didn’t kill Dumbledore.”

“I can’t believe you’re defending him!”

“And I can’t believe you don’t want to give him a chance!”

"Can you believe this Harry?"

Harry shrugged his shoulders: "I was wondering what they would do with him, but I don't really know what else they should do?" 

"Come on you four!" McGonagall shouted, giving them a short smile. 

Harry noticed Malfoy walking slowly by himself with his head down, the other students kept bumping into him and Malfoy eventually fell. Harry felt sorry for him and before he knew it he had let go of Ginny’s hand and was helping Malfoy back up. As soon as Malfoy was back on his feet he realized who had helped him. He stared at Harry confused and stepped back.

“Thanks.” He murmured.

“No worries,” Harry replied.

They stood awkwardly beside each other in an empty hallway.

“Come on, ceremony’s starting, we should probably head in.” Harry said giving Malfoy a small smile.

***

Harry took a deep breath before walking into the dining hall, this was it; he now had to face everyone who like him had fought for their future. As he entered the hall everyone became silent. Like so many times before he felt everyone watching him.

But this time it was different.

He was different.

The horcrux had not only let him share Voldemort’s abilities, but it had also had an influence on his mind. He felt more positive about everything; he felt a freedom he hadn’t felt before. He was so much more than the boy who lived and he had proven that. He caught up to the others and took Ginny’s hand. As they walked he felt everyone looking at him.

Before he could react, a familiar voice sounded: “HARRY!” as Harry looked up he saw his big friend,
Hagrid. He ran into his arms as he had done so many times before.

“Hagrid, it’s good to see you! How are you?”

“Oh, you know,” Hagrid laughed, “Things have been a bit crazy around here but Professor McGonagall has everything under control. She’s no Dumbledore, but she’s doing very well.”

“Please be seated,” McGonagall stood where he had seen Dumbledore, Umbridge and Severus once stand.

However they were all gone now. Harry found a seat with his friends and listened to what McGonagall had to say:

“I would like to welcome our new students and welcome back our old, before we begin I have some new announcements and I would like to introduce some new teachers…” 

Harry looked around and saw Malfoy sitting at the Slytherin table. They caught each other’s eyes for a
moment and Malfoy nodded and gave Harry a friendly smile. Harry smiled back and Malfoy turned away – the hatchet was buried at last.

McGonagall had finished her speech and the sorting ceremony had begun. Harry turned to see all the new students, even though most of them had siblings at the school, they all seemed very nervous. Harry especially noticed three kids standing together; he was instantly brought back to when he was sorted. Remembering how he convinced the Hat not to place him in Slytherin. He started to imagine what would had happened if he was placed in Slytherin. Would he still be friends with Hermonie and Ron? Or would he be friends with Malfoy?

“Harry, you ought to try this, I think it’s a new recipe!” Ron said with a passion. Hermonie laughed and Harry realized it didn’t matter how things could have turned out. The important thing was what he had now; good friends and love. 


Monday, 5 August 2013

 
Five Links.
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

Continuation of Twilight Saga..

I think it's a bit dull the twilight saga ended on a weird note, it wasn't actually certain that Bella and her little family will be protected forever. but here's my little in take of what I would've like to have happened with Renesmee and Jacob. I am not at all creative so bare with me lol.


Speaking from Renesmee's POV.

It was literally the best day of my life. Me and Jacob were officially sealed as one. It didn't take long for Aunty Alice came galloping towards me and Jacob with a big grin on her face.

"Can i please show you the little gift i got you both now? Pretty please?" she said excitedly.

Jacob smiled ,"Okay Alice."

She blindfolded the both of us and led the way. It came as no surprise to me after the blindfolds were removed that we both stood in front of the most beautiful house I'd ever laid eyes on. There in front of me stood a three story wooden house. Alice knew myself and Jacob wanted to stay close to the family, and we were. They placed a beautiful house right next to mum and dad's.

"Alice! You shouldn't have" I said as I ran with excitement inside holding Jacob's hand.

"It's perfect' said Jacob as he hugged Alice.

We walked back outside to everyone waiting. Mum and Dad, Uncle Emmet , Uncle Jasper and Aunty Rosalie stood there with warm smiles as it was such a special moment for Me and Jacob.

"Well I guess me and Nessy shall make ourselves at home" said Jacob, as he humorously hinted for everyone to let us have some alone time. Nessy was my nickname everyone would call me. We all laughed while Dad stood there not laughing as much as we were.

"Lighten up Edward, our baby girl's all grown up, and in the best hands .Besides she's right next door" mum said.

Dad smiled and walked over to give me and Jacob both a hug before they all went back to clean up the wedding decorations. Jacob lifted me off the ground,

"Welcome home sweetheart" he said.

I laughed as he carried me inside and took me upstairs to our beautiful bedroom. I walked over to the window and was absolutely amazed at the breathtaking view we had. The sun shone all over forks washington, the beautiful pink orange sun about to set on this most beautiful evening as Jacob walked over and wrapped his arms around me and joined me in dazing at the view. It was picture perfect, exactly how my life seemed. It was no ordinary afternoon in forks, today I went to sleep as Mrs Renesmee Black.

 
Next morning.
 
I sat in bed trying to not burst out in laughter listening to Jacob's snore. How did the whole of forks not hear this Werewolf ? It sounded like a broken washing machine. I felt humorous. I leaned over to him and blocked his nose with my fingers.
 
"NESSY!" he yelled.
 
I jumped out of bed and ran down the stairs laughing hysterically as he chased me from behind.
 
"Gotcha"
 
I tripped up as he grabbed me by the ankle. He sat on top of me ,tickling my feet on the living room floor. Jacob knew how much I hated being tickled. Dad and Mum walked in on Jacob bouncing up and down on me like a spring while I tried pulling his hair to get off.
 
"How romantic" Mum said sarcastically looking over to Dad.
 
"Yes, I don't rememember our honeymoon being this ...violent?" Dad replied scratching his head.  
 
They both giggled.
 
"Mum, Dad! So good to see yous."
 
I punched Jacob in the stomach and he finally got off. I walked over and hugged them.
 
"Nessy sweetheart, why won't you just take our offer of having a proper Honeymoon where your Father and I had. It's just such a magical island. You really are missing out."
 
Mum and Dad were still trying to convince me and Jacob to have a romantic Honeymoon get away prior to the wedding, but we both politely declined their offer simply because it wasn't our thing. Everyday loving Jacob is my honeymoon.
 
"Mum, seriously it's fine. This place, Jacob , everyone around me makes life magical. Ugh, what's that smell?"
 
Jacob giggled from behind me. "Sorry"
 
"Gross Jacob! Way to kill the moment." We both laughed at eachother while Mum and Dad looked at us confused laughing about Jacob's fart incident.
 
"I will never understand what you have going on with eachother but I do know you both are destined for one another."
 
"Thanks Dad." I hugged him again.
 
*phone rings.
 
"I'll get that" Jacob said running up the stairs to where the phone was.
 
 
 
 




Monday, 22 July 2013

Heeeeeeey everyone !! :) Can't wait to share our stories and ideas up on here . Right Akosita ? :)